Economic progress is one way to measure a country's success. Some people believe that there are other factors should be considered when measuring the success of a country. What are the other factors? Do you think there is a factor that is more important than the others?
Countries in the world are keeping pace with each other to succeed and develop. Some people think that to measure their success, countries must have strong medical support for citizens while others claim that knowledge is the most effective way to evaluate the growth of a country. My essay will shed light on factors required to appraise the attainment of a country.
The accomplishment of a nation is contingent on various factors. First, despite that some nations are considered to be well developed, the gap between the rich and poor remains wide, followed by potential consequences such as conflicts, bias and strikes. Hence, to reach the real zenith of success, social fairness must be well- established. How can people feel satisfied to live in a wealthy country, but the black are despised while the working-class are deprived of their rights? In addition, were it not for the timely succor of governments for the disabled, the ill and the provision of health-care insurance, can a nation be labeled as developed? In reality, only by immunizing kids against unwanted virus and supplying medical aid to all citizens regardless of their income is a country put on a list of developed world, such as the case of Norway, Japan and France. The longer and healthier people live, the more successful governments are deemed.
Along with two factors above is the focus on technological progress and application. Though developing countries in recent years garner significant financial progress, they are still slow in the application of technology in most fields to boost productivity and emancipate human labor. For that reason, they are still in the stage of infant, but not mature growth. Some people might say that technology progress is the most crucial in measuring the success of a country. With technology, every field of life is revolutionized. However, the truth is that to make use of technology for long-term purposes involves wise brain. Or even with the social fairness achieved, this fact will never last long if in the future, people keep fighting for their rights in an aggressive way? Again, to found an equitable society needs citizens' acute self-awareness and mutual respect for each person. Even to ensure a disease-free nation, governments entail citizens to have real understanding of body protection and use their intelligence to come up with innovative and effective medical ideas. Also, with early recognition, humans would never be lured into bloody wars to assert their identity. In other words, citizens' average knowledge level is the most essential and trusted indicator to evaluate how much country succeed and progress because it is the prerequisite for all other factors.
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Organized tour to remote community and other countries is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment? 84
- People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty for a society. What extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems.To what extend do you agree? 84
- The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an aggressive way" with adverb for "aggressive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, well, while, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18264840183 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85713786797 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566210045662 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9378191694 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.095238095 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227202539611 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636820305597 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071841167712 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179177071533 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799820269072 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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