Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, environmental protection has been taken seriously by a large number of countries around the globe. Some opinion state that officers have the responsible of taking care our surrounding, not individuals who only have little effect on such a huge mission. This essay will explain why people are the core of the solution.
Politicians have the lead and support role. As the goverment form policies and rules in order to made others do the right things, they form standards of which is good or bad for the environment through education system. Using news and researches to raise people awareness, decide which actions are needed to be done to protect our resources. For instance, Singapore have banned chewing gum for good, they also heavy fined anyone who putting trash in the wrong place. So goverments lead people to done the right action to improve the situation.
The essential actions are belong to individuals. Although a single person only affect a bit, when it come to billions of people, the effect will multiply. When people stop to pollute their living space, the environment clearly improve significantly. For example, during the pandemic, the seen that the air quality rate have good reports, especially in industrial zone when people have been lock down at home. Moreover, big communities support the green actions will create crowd affect and encourage even more people to take part in. Therefore, every single citizen action is precious for the course of protecting our globe.
In conclusion, individuals have crusial role in preserve our environment, goverment is a great supporter and also a leader to all the activities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... protection has been taken seriously by a large number of countries around the globe. Some opinio...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...situation. The essential actions are belong to individuals. Although a single perso...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...ingle person only affect a bit, when it come to billions of people, the effect will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17164179104 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69859455348 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.558815104 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974299456308 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300699361221 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037541898995 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705033963989 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432059068727 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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