Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this, and what
are possible solutions?
In many different parts of countries, the government have made efforts to enhance the healthcare system. However, generally, the standard of physical health in developed nations is falling. This phenomenon happens due to several reasons and it should be solved immediately.
Several reasons explain why health care is decreasing with the aid of the government. One of the first explanations is that they are neglected to their health. In other words, this is because of their eating habits. Individuals consume junk food or processed food including snacks, fried chicken, hamburgers and the like which contain a lot of fatty materials and even addictive ones. Another justification is that with the advanced technological, people spend prolonged time sitting in front of their laptops, smartphones instead of engaging in outdoor activities such as playing sports, taking part in clubs and something like that. According to a survey in BBC news, half of the older people interact with their families, relatives, friends through social networking online rather than face to face communication.
This leads to a sedentary lifestyle, which can be attributed to many problems such as heart disease, cardiovascular disease, stress, FOMO…
To deal with this issue, the government and individuals take responsibility for it. In terms of the government, they should take action by setting up campaigns about improving and expanding knowledge about the importance of health. Besides, the government should punish strictly the companies about processed food in the way of using targeted advertisements unproperly to attract customers. Regarding inhabitants, we need to raise awareness about physical health as well as mental health by forming good habits like eating whole foods, working out on a daily basis, and so on.
In conclusion, both physical health and mental health play a very important role in our society. Therefore, we make use of the aid of the government to build up a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
In many different parts of countries, the government have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41987179487 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97296158322 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.103203201 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21024840732 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667895016508 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458861502602 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109279305802 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714944160795 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.