Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
According to the statement, many of the tongues become extinct every decade. Therefore, some individuals believe that extinction of languages is not a big issue and also not important because if there are few number of languages, this will make the life of people become easier. I completely agree with this criteria and justification behind this opinion is explained in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in contemporary settings, mostly people like to communicate with others or strangers weather that person is native or foreigner. Therefore, people become more like to conversate in a usual tongue rather different languages. Due to this, people think that it is beneficial to have fewer languages in the world because by this way, they become more comfortable while talking with another person of other religion, country or so on. For instance, most of the individuals travel from one country to another for their work or other purposes. And all know that English is the most usual tongue in which people like to communicate. Due to this, they communicate with other whenever they need in foreign country because they know their common conversate skill.
In addition, in today's modern era, every individual have their busy schedule due to which they have lack of leisure time to learn another language. Therefore, if there are few number of languages in the world, they focus on their career languages without wastage of time on another tongues. For instance, in contemporary settings, most of the students have gone to abroad for their further studies after completing high school education. In this case, if there is only a usual language such as English, then they easily conversate with the masses of that country in which they come for studies. As a result, without any perplex or difficulty, they achieve their goals and only concentrate on that particular career language.
In conclusion, according to some people and I personally believe that it is more beneficial to have minimum number of languages in this world because this gives great advantages by making the life of people easier and more comfortable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...also not important because if there are few number of languages, this will make the life o...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... become easier. I completely agree with this criteria and justification behind this ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...very individual have their busy schedule due to which they have lack of leisure t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...other language. Therefore, if there are few number of languages in the world, they focus o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12356321839 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70857837545 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4932434089 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.866666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279646125105 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099651652701 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990310354872 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209754240227 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088505301937 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.