Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is widely seen that a host of languages vanish annually. Some people assert fewer languages would make life much easier. In my opinion, however, I disagree with this statement due to the benefits that numerous languages may provide.
To begin with, a language is an undeniable identity of one race. Languages are the strongest evidence that a nation is existing for a given time since they are created by their ancestors and passed down to younger generations. Moreover, culture, tradition, and history of a country are rooted in languages. Provided if a language, such as Chinese, disappear, people might not understand the history of China. Thus, this may lead to the vanishing of traditional customs and festivals of a nation. Besides, some ethnicities may disappear as well once they lose their languages.
Another point of my disagreement with this opinion is the loss of knowledge written by one's specific language. Human beings have explored a variety of ancient knowledge that is carved on stones or written down on paper by particular languages. For instance, documentaries by Greek genius hold knowledge for the human race which are still used these days and are written in Greek only. Without fully understand these languages people would never have chances to study these important documentaries. Or, it will be impossible for people to understand how to make Japanese tea or cook Korean food once the languages of these countries diminish. Even though fewer languages enable people to communicate easier, less information is transferred with a limited number of languages.
In conclusion, despite the belief fewer languages would make life easier, every language needs to be upheld due to the identities and knowledge that they contribute to not a nation but also the whole human race.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20205479452 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80864305187 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7145577056 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292534307224 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946364595154 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743133608298 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197812513917 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793241248797 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.