Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree.
Concerning the issues of having a diet without meat or fish, it is believed that vegetarian diet is better for the human body. As far as I am concerned, I do partially agree with the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.
First of all, it can be said with certainty that vegetarian is more healthier. The key explanation is possibly because they eat only plant foods or dried fruits are high in fiber. Besides, they do not eat meat so it has lower risks of developing several chronic illness as hear disease, diabetes, some forms of cancer and obesity.
Second of all, a special consideration in this case is that good health. The main basis is probably because vegetarians eat a lot of vegetables. That properly give their adequate nutrition to support body. Vegetables and fruits like spinach, berries, … or nuts are a great source of vitamin A, E, K, … prevent their from aging, strengthen the brain. Instead of eating many kind of food to get these vitamins, they only need a bowl of spinach or cereal with Greek yogurt, it is not only provide vitamins but also helps their weight loss.
In contrast, it must be admitted that there are some advantages to becoming a vegetarian. Some of healthy food is quite expensive, it costs so much money. Moreover, if they do not know how to balanced meal, they might suffer from a lack of calories to provide energy needs. Consequently, they will feel unable to do anything else.
Taking everything into consideration, people have to weigh up in their thought to what extent this issue should be supported. However, the discussions are convincing enough to lead me to the conclusion that a vegetarian diet is not for everyone and people have to know the way to choose foods and preparation of meals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
... said with certainty that vegetarian is more healthier. The key explanation is possibly becaus...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...strengthen the brain. Instead of eating many kind of food to get these vitamins, they onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, in contrast, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71153846154 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63556661348 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612179487179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0355132596 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331581368879 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846766797954 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554803823085 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157642638798 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439777359996 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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