Everyone should become vegetarian because they donot need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Every people become plant eater. Because they donot want to eat meat to stay healthy in their life. This essay will accord with the statement to up extent. As vegetarian food consume less time to prepare and keep body fit. While, eating non-veg food leads to health problems.
To began with, plant eating food easily digest as well as take less time to make as compare to meat. Because it take to much time to prepare and very expensive instead of vegetables. As a result, become a vegetarian help people to stay away from the diseases in their life. Moreover, people can grow vegetables in their home or fields. For instance, they can take care of green vegetables without pouring any type of pesticides. So that, individuals give more preference to vegetables as compare to meat. Furthermore, by eating these vegetables people can gain different type of protein, nutrition,minerals so on. Which help people to overcome from many problems and keep their self healthy.
On the flip side, while eating non-veg people have to suffer from many problems. Such as, high blood pressure, obesity,high cholesterol as well as heart diseases. By which individuals have to eat green vegetables to stay away from such types of obstacles. Last but not the least, if people eat meat in their daily routine life it increase the anger among the people. So that, they never control their anger in front of others and make mistakes in their different stage of life. Which should be detrimental for them.
To conclude, eating meat not a bad habit but people have to eat non-veg to some extent and give more preference to green vegetables to become physically fit and stay far from diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Every people become plant eater. Because they...
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Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Every people become plant eater. Because they donot want to eat meat to stay hea...
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...less time to prepare and keep body fit. While, eating non-veg food leads to health pr...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
... to make as compare to meat. Because it take to much time to prepare and very expens...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ake as compare to meat. Because it take to much time to prepare and very expensive...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , minerals
...ain different type of protein, nutrition,minerals so on. Which help people to overcome fr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , high
...s. Such as, high blood pressure, obesity,high cholesterol as well as heart diseases. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...eat meat in their daily routine life it increase the anger among the people. So that, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87762237762 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55791396637 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517482517483 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.95226909 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.75 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201173525891 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646036376286 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635343281325 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151008529563 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728469687545 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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