Exercise is important for our health, but are there things that are more important?
There is no denying that the fast space of the modern life is the main reason of the scarity of physical activities of many people especially youngsters which is considered as the most crucial thing in our life. Nevertheless, it is often argued that there are many things that are much more essential. From my point of view, I wholeheartedly believe that exercise is the most momentous thing in our daily life.
At the outset, it is apparent that exercise is seen as an efficacious way to keep fit and stay healthy. Without regular physical activities, human’s body gradually loses its strength and the ability to function properly. Exercise exerts a positive impact on people’s health in sense that it can increase the muscle strength, make it move more flexibly along with regulate other activities of the body parts, which plays an integral role in the process of boosting people’s immune system. Furthermore, it has been obviously proved that exercise is a dominated indicator which can intensify the life expectancy. A person doing exercises more regularly is less likely to have to suffer from some heart diseases or stroke than those with sedentary lifestyle.
Moreover, exercise is an undoubtedly natural mood lifter. Moderate physical activities can help to release stress, anger and depression after a hard working day, which can make people feel comfortable and a good sensation. Not only does it make a great contribution to have a happy healthy life, but it also is capable of enhancing the productivity of work and study, making people concentrate on their work better.
Last but not least, exercise can have a long lasting effect on the development of the society. People can take a full advantage of it with the aim of advancing their health accompanied by their living standards and more generally, the national health. It is undeniable that in all likelihood, a nation with a low rate of longevity will not be able to evolve prosperous. This is the basic foundation which can affect every aspects of the society such as education, economy and public services.
To sum up, I totally claim that exercise is the most pivotal thing in our life due to its potential benefits people can reap from.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00268817204 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81159022618 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6517409557 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175999618703 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605398954311 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502647690692 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103176805105 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499889492336 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.