Gender equality has not been achieved in our society. Women still do not have the same rights and opportunities as men.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Indeed, women have hitherto been permitted to equally join manifold areas concerning businesses, education, and politics. Even though the progression of equality is being strengthened annually, society still has some confinement in the equivalence between women and men. In my estimation, I strongly disagree with this opinion as several aspects include the feminine side such as education, business, and politics.
First and foremost, the deciding element involved in gender fairness is that access to education has been made possible for women and men equally. Surprisingly, there is an increase in the number of female students, who were always appointed to be housewives, enrolling in divergent levels of education including primary, secondary, and high school in many Asian countries. This also means that girls who receive an education are less likely to get married early and lead to healthy and productive lives, which makes a decisive contribution to their economy and reduces inequality. In addition to educational similarity, more women are allowed to take a role in the workplace.
Another reason why that there is no gap between men and women in society is that nowadays they have the freedom and incentives to express their own opinion and even become a representative of an organization. Contrary to popular belief, there is a considerable figure for female ministers, politicians, and presidents in the world who do not merely decisively and quickly respond to abrupt situations but also cope with divergent repercussions. Consequently, the country as a whole can be benefited due to the conscientiousness of female leaders.
On balance, despite having some restrictions on career proposition, allowing women to take part in many different fields regarding education and politics that were just only for men proves the equal position and power in the world. I personally believe that gender imbalance will be undeniably attained thanks to the increasing awareness of women's intelligence and power.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...osition, allowing women to take part in many different fields regarding education and politics...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, second, so, still, then, well, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37435897436 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00938265395 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587179487179 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9324369217 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197679229425 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588503568433 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524339657857 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105649040468 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382244472106 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.