Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society. Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a
threat to life on earth.
Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
In the contemporary era, medical science has brought many changes to mankind; especially, in genetic engineering which is set of technologies used to change the genetic makeup of cell. Nowadays, genetic engineering is a considerable problem in the community; people are of different opinions about genetic technology; certain believe that it will enhance lifestyle of human race, while other opine that it may be a menace to survival on earth. From my point of view, to certain extent, it appears to be reasonable and it will be discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
To begin, there are certain favorable argument of genetic engineering that could be put forth. The first and foremost one is, some drugs and vaccines are produced by it. To explain, nowadays, people are facing disease problems that are lethal on human beings in order that scientists may use genetic engineering to make remedy of that fatal diseases; as a result, humans could live longer and healthier lives. Not only that but also inherited illness would no longer exist due to alternation in DNA structure. Moreover, human could all have replacement of body parts. To cite an example, celebrities are doing plastic surgery to look more handsome. Thus, modification of an organism's genes can be benefited to the community.
On the contrary, certain facts have negative influence on society. There may be risks involved in the food which is produced by genetic engineering. Put it more simply, the genetic crop has fewer nutrition values compare to the original crop. What is more, food chains could be broken if crops are resistant to predators; consequently, genetically modified yield of crops might change whole ecosystems. Hence, society and human evolution would change completely.
To recapitulate, I reiterate my opinion by saying that genetic engineering would be beneficial to society to cure diseases provided that, it is used carefully.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2996742671 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87578801593 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599348534202 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2912807318 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249764023181 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702839116822 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646447667256 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152598251714 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630643377874 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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