Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is undeniable fact that are is an expression or application of human creative skill and imagination. People are of different opinion about art; certain believe that art should be prime subject for pupils while other opine that it has no worth. Both views will be discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
To begin, there are several reasons that take side of art could be put forth. The first and foremost one is that expression. To explain, one can share their thoughts and feelings which is perplexable to express in words, could be done by art, easily. For instance, people can exhibit love and affection towards their favourite person by drawing appealing painting. Futhermore, innovative thinking of children should be developed by art. Not only that but also, it would be beneficial later in life and they can think beyond their horizon. Thus, art as subject, can be helpful to polish life of schoolboy.
On the contrary, some measures can be considered against art. There are other most important subject that would be profit children for their future life such as science and technology related subjects. What is more, studying art does not lead to successful career; consequently, most artists struggle to make a livelihood from selling their art. Moreover, art is not help to slove urgent problem of society; whereas, intellectual development of children may be succed to do same. Thus, some facts which are favor against art cannot be overlooked.
To recapitulate, art is crucial subject but should not be main focus or any curriculum or detract from other more important subject; therefore, having a balanced of subjects is best way to help children develope a balance character life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for instance, such as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33707865169 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10580623143 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.744951452 49.4020404114 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 356.25 106.682146367 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.75 20.7667163134 321% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.5 7.06120827912 517% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237065642797 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15678254207 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535863533284 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15678254207 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535863533284 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.49 50.2224549098 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.46 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.