To considerate current scenario, government body is supporting more and more space exploration. People are of different opinion about research on space; certain argue that authority is providing financial aid to find lifeforms on other heavenly body, while other opine that money should be spent on different problems of civic. From my point of view, to certain extent, it appears to be reasonable that will be discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
To begin, there are several measures which is baked to space foundation that could be put forth. The first and foremost one is that unfold hidden mystery of cosmos.To explain, nowadays, space organization is launching satellites and it is floating in sky in order to gain knowledge about universe. Furthermore, if scientists may be successful to find the lifeforms on other planet where is no problems like earth such as fatal diseases, fear of nuclear exploration, one can get life without afraid of that lethal unwelcome situation; therefore, it would be solution of that issues which are hard to tackle on earth. Thus, space exploration programs are used to address some problems of the modern society.
On the country, it has some fact that can be considered against space research. Very expensive space program are straining the government budget jeopardizing essential and rare pertinent issues. In other words, there are many problems such as education related , scarcity of health related facilities, which have more priority to solve them than space. Not only that but also, exponentially increasing medical cost are making access to primary healthcare out of reach for many; consequently, many people are not able to diagnose their health related issues. Hence, medical and healthcare should be given paramount importance.
To recapitulate, spending money on space exploration programs would be benefited provided that they find solution of problem on earth and health and education issues can be reduced if administrator give them first priority than space research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38679245283 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82664074442 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6000777321 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15977359928 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545771479073 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431122831657 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100973335476 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390714448837 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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