Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone.
Do you agree or disagree?
While some people argue that doing activities alone for life gives crucial skills, I side with them who believe that group could instruct the important skills.
Carrying out activities by self is harder because there are no people who will help you. In addition, without helping from the others everyone is going to get more trouble in life. For example learning, student can learn by their self but, that would be more difficult because they will not make out directly the subject they study. Of course they need someone who can justify so learner that understood moreover, research has researched that human is not live without mutualism. A lack of concern for the suffering and grief that others experience and feel, a loos of grass and tolerance in social life. In addition, tolerance is indispensable in nation life and work to create serenity and harmony.
The other hand, doing an activity shall be extremely easy is done by together or team up. For example on playing football where a team comprise 11 people that each player has their own position. Their purpose is same to shoot the ball into the net, but it requires teamwork well among players. Team up can make a hard occupation breeds a sense of community and strengthens the bonds of brotherhood. Furthermore, cooperation could foster social and create caring for others. Moreover, it is able to avoid selfishness or self-interest. Another benefit of working together is developing the ability to communicate. For every task to be smooth, there must surely be coordination between the two sides. It was this communication that was amplified to get the job done quickly.
To sum up, team up is very crucial in life because making every occupation is easier, then making relation among people are closer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a loo' or simply 'loos'?
Suggestion: a loo; loos
... grief that others experience and feel, a loos of grass and tolerance in social life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96632996633 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62396947282 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4822533225 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7647058824 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234493008497 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612163540747 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568995624811 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134890959624 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595056698816 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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