With a growing world population one of the pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about genetically modified food, which is considered as one of the remedial measures for food shortage caused by alarming population growth. I completely agree with the idea that this can be a good solution to have enough food for everyone, as GM crops can be more resistant to pests and diseases.
First, it goes without saying that scientists, by changing the DNA of plants, can make them more resilient to weather conditions and resistant to pests. In other words, it is the inefficient use of farmlands and the non-resistance of plants to some insects that is the main reason for food shortage in developing and underdeveloped countries. Scientifically modified crops, therefore, cannot be harmed by insects since they have an immune against them. According to a recent survey taken place in the University of Oxford, farmers no longer have to rely heavily on pesticides due to the introduction of GM seeds. Adding further, genetic modification can make vegetables bigger and more abudant, hence, agricultural land can be used efficiently. This means that the more people need agricultural lands to harvest non-DNA crops, the more lands require water and pesticides. As a consequence, using fewer pesticides and water can positively affect the environment in the long term.
That is not to say that GM foods do not have any demerits. In other words, some DNA structure of these foods are modified that has a harmful effect on the human race. For instance, not only do genetically modified foods increase the allergies among people, but they are also resistant to antibiotics. In addition, these seeds are expensive and some farmers cannot afford them, which enables big corporations to control the market price of vegetables and fruits.
In conclusion, I would argue that GM food is beneficial for human beings on many levels. Only by doing so, can the government address the problem of hunger and keep the environment sustainable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09422492401 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90848266981 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565349544073 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6624776432 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.733333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15799061314 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531659824185 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497364819035 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109896908933 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596947195085 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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