Since the advancement of a technical era in advertisement help people in identifying and choose the product according to their need. Many argue that product commercials are trivial if customers are getting things they need. However, I completely disagree with this statement because it broadens people’s thinking and choosing ability in various ways.
Taking knowledge while watching advertisements is extremely beneficial for individuals. To commence with, Product commercials help them in analyses about the speciality of product they are going to purchase and also descriptions, which they see in the label of the particular item that how to use it is helpful. To explain it, although customers know what kind of item he or she needs, advertisements assist them to think deeply about its proper use and how to apply it and even many cons to not utilize well in the given time period. For example, the Majority of Facial cream companies show information related to their product, such as price, manufacturing and expiry date, how to use it on the face and restrictions to keep it away from children. That is the reason why even if everyone knows what to buy, getting more understanding via commercials may help them.
Furthermore, due to competition in the market, most of the time, rates of products go up and down according to the demand. People who want a particular item get bemused, But if organizations display their product’s uniqueness, it helps both customers and the company. To elucidate it, many smartphone companies are now growing, and almost everyone strives to obtain the best features via watching reviews and get more information about it before purchasing, which they may solely attain through commercials. For instance, when individuals go to smartphone shops, it is often seen that they get confused; the reason behind it is that unless they compare 3-4 phones, it is arduous to opt for one.
To conclude, many believe that advertisement of products is unnecessary if people know what to buy; I, on the other hand, think that these are indispensable for consumers to increase their knowledge and selecting capability.
- Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries Why is this the case Is it a positive development 84
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 73
- In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining Why do you think it is happening How to solve this issue 78
- Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Getting promotions is one of the biggest motivators for hard work in the modern workplace Why are people so driven to receive promotions What other factors motivate people to work hard 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17191977077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98102801483 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567335243553 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4719967634 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.846153846 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183395378942 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720338696758 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554562499864 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134460567929 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603561849642 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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