Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Positive developments in the sectors of health, trade and education are crucial for less developed country to grow. Thus, it is essential for the governments of developed countries, be more involved and help in the development of third world countries. This essay completely agrees with this notion.
Developed nations helping and being more involved in the development of poorer nations in their various institutions will help to curb the excess migration from these countries. Many poor nations lack finance, with foriegn aid and donations from richer countries, the less developed nations will be able to withstand economic downfall and make progress in the building of adequate infrastructures and providing basic ameneties for its populace. As a result, a less developed nation will be able to provide for its people in various sectors like food, jobs, trade and so on. This, invariably will encourage its indigines to stay back and contribute to its development, thereby curbing the excess migration to other foreign nations. For instance, according to the 2020 report from the United Kingdom Embassy, 90% of applications recieved for visas, are for jobs and employment and this developed has been frowned upon by its citizens.
In addition, richer countries helping poorer nations develop will bring about a reduction in poverty and unrest in these countries. Again, with financial aid and loans to the government of third world countries, they are able to empower their citizens and create financial stability. Hence, poverty is reduced to its minimum and peace would reign.
To sum up, it is imperative richer nations take the responsibility and assist poorer nations because it will bring out a reduction in excesive migration, unrest and poverty level of less developed nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, third, thus, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35689045936 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7989211707 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530035335689 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.056665327 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34003338948 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131100806937 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925950241804 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213172225693 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510622156065 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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