These days writing is considered to be a thing of the past. Many people think it hard to write letters and usually keep away from doing that. I don't believe that letter writing is a dying art and I disagree with this statement.
Firstly, I strongly agree with the idea that with some issues we can have hope letter writing become improve and won't die. For example, some people can support their mind by writing and typing may be difficult for them. In other words, the researchers found that prolonged staring at screens of computers or smartphones can damage the eyes. In addition, some organizations believe that a letter is more formal than other communication ways such as email and Fax. Consequently, these are some of the reasons why I believe letter writing is not a lost or old skill.
Secondly, we shouldn't miss the fact that because of globalization, the communication world is becoming more innovative and up-to-date and it is not always possible to use the telephone or writing a letter to connect to people. Furthermore, writing a letter by computers may be rather than writing by hand. Moreover, some people claim that modern communication ways such as computers and smartphones are faster than old ones including writing a letter by hand. It just needs people to learn how written both ways because I strongly believe that, It's important every person knows that, they need these skills for being successful in their job and routine. Hence, I don't agree that this skill is gradually disappearing.
To sum up, we need writing letter for some formal situation and choose that for less physical damage. We should improve our skill in both modern and traditional communication ways If we want to be successful in our career and field. I believe, modern communication won't replace the art of writing letter and it's never won't be a dying art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85488958991 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71041993431 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504731861199 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6119249747 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342167371589 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125168094473 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608090615005 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231413345096 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062909431665 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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