Indivudual sports and team sports
As our societies become more centered on city life, people have to rejuvenate themselves, achieving a comfortable level of physical exercise.Thus, a comparison between team sports and individual sports to find out which is more beneficial, we could take a close look before reaching the decision that individual sports are more beneficial and easier to pursuit
On the one hand, the benefits of group activities are considerable and could let us feel stronger physically and mentally. Beside that a team game performance, necessitating a high level of coordination and reaction time, not just tuning muscles and team sports teach us to appreciate teamwork, to be aware of our strengths and how to contribute these strengths to the shared goal. Moreover, taking team sports means learning how to get feedback without fearing your relationships are fallen which has a significantly positive effects. Especially teenagers, (may I keep the idea about teenagers and turn it into an example?) the true is that frequence contact with team, gets feedbacks from teammates build up their maturities. (wrong usage)(I don’t really know how to fix this could you please help me with this?). On the other hand, as having fun is a key, being in a wrong team could sap your energy rather than you feel empowered.
While choosing a sport or looking for a team would be difficult. Instead we refer independent activities as well as badminton or tennis which require a higher level of self-reliance. Success or failure are depended on yourself and every competition could push your personal best, improving your self-confidence and independence in all areas of life. In addition, the independent physical activities do not require many players to hold. Perhaps, we could make our personal tranning at home and simply do it alone, making the individual sports to be more reasonable to follow than the sports require a great number of players.
In conclusion, while there are some different advantages between two kinds of sport. Individual sports seem to be more advantage than team sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1755952381 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95162330668 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.248995048 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.214285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332708436145 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119420739408 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108970059044 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235555854495 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509878773442 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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