Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary cause of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
There is no doubt that human intervene bring negative impact to the environment especially for others creature such as animals and plants which became endangered as times goes by. In this essay I will explain more about the main reason behind the extinction of diversity and the solution which is plausible to tackle this situation.
First and foremost causes of animals and plants extinction is mine activities which is operated in natural habitat of them. However, to fulfill the resources such as oil and gas, company must to destroy the vegetation in those area, meanwhile several animals are rely on with those plants for surviving. In the meantime, mine activity have been degrade soil quality in which it would be difficult for plant in the nearby area to live, while it can lead to the worst catastrophic such as flood and avalanche. Because of that, several animals who lose their neighborhood cannot survive for looking the food, got the appalling suffering of famine and the number of them will be decrease with unprecedented number.
One of the most effective action that must be taken. Government should make a strict regulation and program which focusing in restoration ecosystem. Take Indonesia as an example, the regulations are very complicated and restricted, it makes investor in natural resources which potentially deteriorate the environment unwilling to investing in Indonesia. Meanwhile, people can make the Non-government organization which consent in environmental issues and obtain more well-wishers for together safeguard the ecosystem.
To sum up, mine activity is the primary reason which leading to bio-diversity losses.
Therefore government and society have to contribute for solve this problem, for example making the strict rules and create the non-government organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
...mpany must to destroy the vegetation in those area, meanwhile several animals are rely on ...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...ose area, meanwhile several animals are rely on with those plants for surviving. In ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'degraded'.
Suggestion: degraded
...n the meantime, mine activity have been degrade soil quality in which it would be diffi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...which leading to bio-diversity losses. Therefore government and society have to contribu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, no doubt, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4609929078 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96284182305 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2067307426 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112786584245 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464686370346 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539111054145 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075426653536 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680619524116 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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