The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Smoking is considering as unhealthy activity, but some people still keep the habit all along. In this essay, I will explain the possible reason of this phenomenon and the best method to cutting back smoking among of society.
At least, there are two main reasons that make people keep smoking even though there have been knowing the bad impact that would be happen to their body. Firstly, cigarette is contain by addictive substances that make the user difficult to halt to use it. Nicotine is one of the substances that give an addictive effect for the consumer in which at the same time bring much bad impact to body. Secondly, there are no alternative stuff that can replaced smoking euphoria. The smoker try to use cigarette because it releases some substances that can make them feel relax and enjoy. Therefore, it very difficult for people to stop to be a smoker.
Consider to some disadvantages that would happen in the future, there are several effective and efficient ways to solve this problem. To begin with, government can create higher customs for cigarette. As much as higher the price of cigarette, people would think two times before smoking. Take Malaysia such an example, the legislative had created a regulation to rising the customs charge while in several months later the number of smoker are decreasing significantly. Furthermore, executive can encourage company to create the alternative product that much more safety than cigarette today, such as reducing the nicotine and tar that hazardous for people. If this breakthrough is implemented for a long run, the number of smoker would decrease effectively and efficiently.
To sum up, there are several reasons why people are difficult to stop smoking, the addictive substance and the euphoria that they get from smoking are holding them. In the meantime, there are first and foremost ways to deal with it, such as increasing the customs of cigarette and enforce company to create other safe stuff as the cigarette alteration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[1]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'have known'
Suggestion: have known
...e people keep smoking even though there have been knowing the bad impact that would be happen to ...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ple keep smoking even though there have been knowing the bad impact that would be happen to ...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...en to their body. Firstly, cigarette is contain by addictive substances that make the u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, at least, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07552870091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63868183303 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7403650419 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177266248547 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606765337761 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423792756934 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116292466643 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434462600501 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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