Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Human activity has been causing massive extinction of different species of plants and animals. This is mainly because of deforestation and the abundant use of fossil fuel. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with the loss of biodiversity.
Firstly, The removal of trees and other types of vegetation is one of the leading causes of climate change and species extinction and it also leads to a direct loss of wildlife. Forests are often cut or burned to make way for farming or cattle grazing that reduces the available food and shelter of animals. Secondly, excessive use of non-renewable resources such as coal, oil, and natural gas is related to the reduction of dwindling wildlife. Fossil fuel emits a high level of carbon dioxide greenhouse gas, which is greatly responsible for global warming. As a result, many species are dying out.
There are two effective solutions to deal with biodiversity loss on the planet. One way is combating illegal logging, by creating government regulation to protect forests and halting illegal logging, local communities are forced to reassess their use of forests. In consequence, the growth of many species of plants and animals will get increase. Another method is to stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. These clean energies do not cause grave environment, and it also has low or zero greenhouse and carbon emission. So, with the use of these renewable energies global warming thread will reduce that will save many terrestrial biodiversities.
In conclusion, protecting natural areas and using more renewable energy instead of non-renewable will significantly lessen the extinction of species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lessen the extinction of species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26618705036 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88200217657 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9345366832 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122429370745 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450369093354 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587270496353 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815514280062 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535959436726 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.