International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do Advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Many people believe that international tourist brings a variety of benefits to both the tourist and the host countries. While there are some adverse impacts from this industrial service, I would argue that its benefits outweigh drawbacks/ I would argue that it benefits can compensate drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are some drawbacks of international tourist for the host countries and travelers. Firstly, tourists may have a negative impact on local tradition or customs due to they are insensitive toward local thinking. For example, Western tourists often wear sexy clothes entering special area such as pagoda or temple in an Asia country where sexy appearance is not highly appreciated. Secondly, tourists who travel to the country in epidemic disease period may suffer from health problem. Zika disease for instance has occurred in some countries in Latin in this year, therefore many tourists have been infected the virus then spread it to many nations.
On the other hand, I believe that advantages of international travel that should not be underestimated. First benefit is that, international travel plays a pivotal role in national economy as in many countries the revenue of tourist is the primary source to gain foreign currency. For instance, when travel to other countries, tourists spend money on restaurants, gift shops, hotels which create a large numbers of jobs for local residents. Furthermore, travelling is a golden opportunities for tourists not only to broaden their knowledge but to enlarge their vital skills. Many people have claimed that, travelling to Singapore helps them to gain real knowledge of this beautiful country and its sharp development. In addition, their English have improved a lot by interaction with Singaporean.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks of international tourist, its advantages to both the host countries and travelers outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'opportunity'?
Suggestion: opportunity
...ts. Furthermore, travelling is a golden opportunities for tourists not only to broaden their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94742637266 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2800702288 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282442783975 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110696075159 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103503921772 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208584510938 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119070041667 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.