Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;text-indent:0in"><span lang="VI"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;text-indent:0in"><span lang="VI">The Internet has turned our existence upside down.
It has changed the way people nowadays access the information by just a click
of a button. However, not all the data reported on the internet seems to be
reliable. In my own perspective, the disadvantages when the internet is used as
a huge storage of information outweigh the advantages of using it as a
reference.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;text-indent:0in"><span lang="VI"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;text-indent:0in"><span lang="VI">There are many reasons why more and more people
nowadays rely on the internet as their news source. Firstly, the Internet
stands a good chance of providing up-to-the-minute news as it happens. In fact,
anyone who has access to a smartphone and an internet connection can now find
information about their choice across the globe within a matter of seconds. For
example, statistics in Harvard University depicts that in a day, about 4,000
students use the public internet that is available inside the campus, which
shows that the internet is used exhaustively among the younger generation to
search for any information to be fetched in no time.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;text-indent:0in"><span lang="VI"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;text-indent:0in"><span lang="VI">In contrast, using the internet as a main source
of information can lead to many dangerous effects among people. First of all,
the internet allows anyone and everyone to be a writer and a publisher. No one
will ask them whether they are qualified to do so. As a result, some
inappropriate contents including graphic violence, sex scenes, and sexual
connotations have been appeared, which become an issue that negatively shapes
people’s views especially children’s. Another disadvantage of internet
information is the amount of fake news has been significantly increased in
recent years to draw the public’s attention, which leads to degrading the
degree of authenticity.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;text-indent:0in"><span lang="VI"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;text-indent:0in"><span lang="VI">In conclusion, there are several drawbacks which
outweigh the advantages of using the internet as a source of data. Only by
having a good grasp of choosing the information can we take our roots from
distorted news.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2917.0 1615.20841683 181% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 8.50437317784 5.12529762239 166% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 14.1730615095 2.80592935109 505% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548104956268 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.495277106 49.4020404114 452% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.083333333 106.682146367 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.38176352705 753% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0480534230809 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296013028957 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0215685733535 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.029761997748 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440150741027 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.9 13.0946893788 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.76 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 32.61 12.4159519038 263% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 33.0 10.7795591182 306% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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