‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools’
How far do you agree with this prediction?
All information is digitized and available on the Internet. The Internet and e-books are popular because of their convenience and low cost; however, some people believe that traditional books will never be replaced by the Internet. In my opinion, I agree with this statement.
To begin, conventional paper-book has a high popularity. People can easily find or borrow traditional books to read and books can be shared from person to person. For example, adults can give books to children or donate them to needy children hence everyone can read books. Additionally, reading paper-based helps to remember and grasp information better. This is understandable because when reading a paper book, the reader is rarely distracted and interrupted by external circumstances so that the reader can focus more, easily grasp information, and remember them. Moreover, the feeling on paper gives readers a very unique feeling that cannot be found in e-books. To illustrate, a book often has the scent of paper, the rustling sound when turning the page, the feeling when touching the page, and most especially the happiness and excitement when holding the book to ask for the author's autograph.
The internet also has numerous benefits. E-books have a low cost, high knowledge level, and are convenient to carry consequently they can be read anywhere. Nevertheless, the screens of electronic devices emit a lot of blue light, they are harmful to the eyes, stimulate the brain to stay awake, therefore reading ebooks at night often causes insomnia. And people always cherish paper books, enjoy the feeling they bring.
In conclusion, reading e-books or paper books doesn't matter, each has its advantages; however, it will be a long time before the Internet can replace the conventional paper-book.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29824561404 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83356742284 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1576490332 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187268190828 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706824892076 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764756823605 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154261397292 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11547480303 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.