It is better for people to be unemployed than to be employed but they do not enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people hold the belief that being out of work is better than working without passion for the job. From my perspective, I completely agree with this viewpoint for several reasons.
The first argument given to support my opinion is that being jobless bring about plenty of time which could help one devote their time and effort to develop themselves personally and professionally. In this case, if employers can have more time to gain valuable experience and job-related skills, they will be more likely to have a better job prospect. In fact, many employers are often impressed by those with a big resume gap if these workers have good preparation as they think that those newly-hired candidates can become a major asset to the company.
Another rationale behind my belief is the fact that doing an unsatisfying job can have some inimical effects on an individual’s physical and mental health. Advocates of this view often argue that these jobs often go hand in hand with long working hours and accordingly, many workers often feel enervated after a long day at work followed by stress and pressure. By way of illustration, many Vietnamese students often choose medicine as a career without having any interest in this field because they think that this job is prestigious and well paid. When they become a doctor, they often suffer from burn out and being exhausted in their early career due to long hours of a working day.
In conclusion, I totally agree with this view that many employers should be out of a job rather than remain in the job that they do not like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, so, well, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83763837638 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63528578047 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7214930964 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.1 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216245108692 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960493599566 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080330259934 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168534218928 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074321670825 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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