It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solution?
It is true that, physical exercises are the integral part of human beings' life since doing physical exercises help an individual to stay fit and fine. However, it is incredibly hard for the masses to adopt such tendency such as going to gym,go for running and so on who are living in urban areas. This essay intends to examine not only the factors which are accountable for this trend but also suggest some remedies to restrain this issue in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
Setting wheel to the motion, there are manifold reasons which are associated with this phenomenon. First and foremost, civilians have hectic schedule, and they remain as busy as bee ,and spend their whole day in offices in order to make themselves wealthy;therefore, they do not left with sufficient time to do such type of activities. Besides it, the another considerable point is to mention is that, lack of space because currently, enormous figure of individuals are migrating into cities in search of employment as well as, for jobs. To elaborate it, great number of houses are built by people to live over there along with it, establishment of industries to assign them work As a result, the problem of shorter space arises, and regime is unable to build parks and fitness centres.
On the flip side, there are numerous effective ways by adopting which this problem can be sorted out. Principally, it is worth while if aware campaigns are organised by the authority. In other words, government can aware their citizens about the positive outcomes of doing physical exercises on regular basis by the medium of newspapers and televisions. Consequently, it might be possible that individuals will start doing physical work out. Furthermore, the time period of working hours can be reduced by implementing some stringent rules and regulations. In addition to it, the gym centres should be opened at large scale at free of cost for all the individuals. As a result, people will tend to go over there, and do some physical tasks such as running, push ups.
To recapitulate, although it very rigid for the urban people to do physical exercises due to several reasons, government is not implementing a rational approach towards this worrying concern. This trouble can be sorted out with the collective steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77693075193 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8245017891 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147193860763 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461727146742 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492147055935 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974116129722 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328983597679 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.