Hand-written correspondence is considered as a conventional infomation exchange method, as it is clearly shown a considerably less number of people are choosing to write letters nowadays. There are a few main causes and two key impacts, which I will outline now.
For an exchange-geared society when infomation traverse rapidly is a key element to the success of any type of business, meticulous hand-writting is becoming extremely slow and out-dated. By simply taking advantages of the convenience of e-mails or any other social applications, now individuals can make decisions in the last minute without enduring hours and days looking forward to a proper reply. Moreover, when the popularized of transportation methods and the envolvement of tourism industry emerge, people are now travelling all over the world, from mysterious Egypt to fascinating Africa jungles. The notion of checking online mailboxes is wiser and less time-consuming. One further factor is because of the deterioration in paper and ink quality, we all have some valuable keeping memories and the degrade of hand-written letter can be troublesome. This is solved by storing "electronic letters" in an "online container" as it does not require a physical intruments that tend to be lower in quality gradually over time.
Regarding the impact on fureture youngsters, there are both positive and negative effect occur. Firstly, consider the cost-saving facet in the long run, the amount of money spent of printing, producing paper is not something that can not be hinderred. Not to mention that paper is mainly made from woods, a halt in using paper is somehow brings in environment protection element. However, even it seems like a refined solution, hand-written letters deliver great meaning into it and sometimes it is an unforgettable memory for whoever receives it. Letters are heart-toughing whenever we re-read and this is something irreplacable for each person.
To sum up, the cause of this trend is primarily from the techonology development, and the effect are felt in terms of cost and people's emotions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 804, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...have some valuable keeping memories and the degrade of hand-written letter can be troubleso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, moreover, regarding, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41212121212 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28698353962 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3533456512 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108881441795 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330442321708 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258147452421 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636291771862 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113611163538 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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