It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages
People would face lots of tricky choices in different periods of lifetime. It's hard to decide whether to take risks in both professional and personal lives. I believe that taking risks will bring more opportunities, and this benefit far outweighs any potential downsides.
The most important downside of taking risks is the high probability of failing. Indeed, risks mean precarious future and not having enough experience to analyze results. For instance, when a cutting-edge technology becomes popular, thousands of companies apply it to various fields to explore commercial markets, such as virtual reality, artificial intelligence, and the like. Then, many companies were eliminated in the unclear market, which may have led to a huge loss in economic and labor resources. However, we should accept failing as an essential part of life. Actually, risks can help us build strong mental health by encountering the uncentainty and even the final failure.
On the positive side, people who make risky decisions can have more opportunities and experience. It can also help people grow and develop new skills. For example, if someone is stuck in a job they don't enjoy, taking a risk by quitting and looking for a new job may lead to finding a job that is more fulfilling and rewarding. Taking risks in one's personal life can lead to new experiences and help people learn more about themselves.For example, trying a new hobby or traveling to a new place can be exciting and rewarding.
In conclusion, although taking risks may harm people in the short term, I believe this downside is greatly outweighed by the upside that the risks they take can create life-changing opportunities for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88093378232 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3446194338 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.142857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279790078294 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965748531203 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875417974698 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189255664079 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060604389876 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.