It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, risk plays a vital role on promotive factors leading to success, which some people accept in their career path and life. Although this trend may contain some potential drawbacks, I presume that the benefit of taking risks overcomes the disadvantage.
On the one hand, risk acceptance can have a detrimental impact on mental health as well as financial cost. In fact, individuals would have suffered stress and anxiety without supporters for a long time when they try to complete a dangerous choice. This is because if their achievements are undesirable, it would take considerable time and effort and everything is back to square one. Besides, a struggling business can face potential failure with a huge financial cost. As a result, when people or organizations are unable to repay outstanding debts or obligations, bankruptcy is a legal procedure.
On the other hand, I am convinced that dealing with risk is the best way to become successful in both individual areas and job prospects. First and foremost, some people are willing to pay for their ambitions. While most others abandon their attempt to cope with problems, they are still relentlessly learning and pursuing their objectives that make it
possible to enhance their position and profits. Moreover, to work as a doctor or lawyer, people have to apply to prestigious universities. With a minority rate of acceptance from these educational institutions, there are the best potential career prospects and opportunities for graduates. Obviously, lawyer and medical staff are the highest income all around the world, espectially almost no unemployment.
Inconclution, taking risks should be done by people, even though it includes some negative impact on their life, I believed that more accomplishment would be reached by some struggling with dangerous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3598615917 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01162922044 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629757785467 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0518566279 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22816735632 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710299896069 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509232754874 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125704020991 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043067961552 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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