It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Every now and then, people mention a lot about whether taking risks is essential for their lives, both professional and personal ones. A number of people believe that taking risks brings more chance of success while others have an opposing opinion. In my point of view, the former's idea should be taken into consideration for the following compelling ideas.
First of all, considering professional life, taking risks means someone has higher chance of promotion. In practice, people who have more courage to actually do something new are more likely to be successful. For example, a white-collar with an average rate of income who has the intention of building his own company may succeed in making a large amount of money instead of doing his low-salary job and never being successful. Moreover, people who dare to do risky actions are usually the ones achieving what they dream of. Being people who actively take risks brings them confidence in their both career and personal lives. As a result, they can gain achievement through a process of striving for what they want despite how many times they fail.
On the other hand, taking risks is widely considered irresponsible. People think that those who take risks are irresponsible not only to themselves but also to their surroundings as what they do can affect others' activities. However, this idea is not practical since problems they may create have little to do with other people.
In conclusion, putting yourself at risk can bring more advantages than harm. However, it is crucial to evaluate your ability before making any decisions so as to minimize the downside of taking risks.
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- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: Now and then
Every now and then, people mention a lot about whether tak...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'formers'' or 'former's'?
Suggestion: formers'; former's
...osing opinion. In my point of view, the formers idea should be taken into consideration...
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Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...our ability before making any decisions so as to minimize the downside of taking risks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03676470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64571044089 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4700218351 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335050351789 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122803741302 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103612037701 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206616399684 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653094745897 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.