It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages
Taking risks is a fundamental aspect of human life that helps to push boundaries and reach new heights. In both personal and professional lives, taking risks can lead to significant rewards, but it also involves the possibility of failure. However, I firmly believe that the advantages of taking risks far outweigh the disadvantages.
To begin with, taking risks in personal and professional lives can bring many benefits. In personal life, taking risks allows individuals to step out of their comfort zone and embrace new experiences. For example, if someone has never traveled alone before, they may feel hesitant and afraid at first. Nonetheless, taking the risk to travel alone could allow them to discover new cultures, meet new people, and gain valuable experience. Similarly, in professional life, taking risks can help individuals to achieve success. For instance, starting a business or pursuing a new career path involves a certain degree of risk, but it can lead to great financial rewards and job satisfaction.
Despite the potential downsides, such as disappointment and failure, taking risks often leads to growth and development. When individuals take risks, they learn to face difficulties and overcome obstacles, which builds resilience and self-confidence. Even when things do not go according to plan, taking risks can teach individuals important lessons that they can use to improve themselves and their future prospects.
In addition, taking risks can lead to innovation and progress. Many of the greatest inventions and breakthroughs in history have come from individuals who took risks and pursued unconventional ideas. These risk-takers pushed beyond the status quo and helped to advance society as a whole.
Overall, while there are certainly risks involved in taking risks, the benefits are clear. By taking risks, individuals can grow, develop, innovate, and ultimately achieve their goals. Therefore, I strongly believe that the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5501618123 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01841660571 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4777126297 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425398431583 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152204982523 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821046033247 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250146398879 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668704441327 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.