It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages
Taking risks is an inherent part of life. Some people avoid them at all costs, while others thrive on the adrenaline rush that comes with taking chances. While risks can be both beneficial and harmful, it's ultimately up to the individual to decide whether or not they are willing to take them. In this essay, I will argue that the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages in both personal and professional contexts.
Firstly, taking risks can lead to personal growth and development. Whether it is trying a new hobby or pursuing a romantic interest, taking risks can help us expand our comfort zone and learn more about ourselves. The fear of failure can often hold us back from trying new things, but by taking risks, we can gain confidence and self-esteem. For example, if someone has always wanted to learn how to play guitar but has been too afraid to try, taking the risk to enroll in guitar lessons could result in the discovery of a new passion and a sense of accomplishment.
Secondly, in the professional world, taking risks can lead to career advancement and financial success. Innovators and entrepreneurs who take calculated risks often reap the benefits of their efforts. They may develop new products, services or processes that revolutionize their industry and lead to significant financial gains. Additionally, taking risks demonstrates initiative and leadership, which are highly valued qualities in many workplaces.
While there are certainly potential downsides to taking risks, such as financial loss or embarrassment, these risks can often be mitigated through careful planning and preparation. It's important to note that not all risks are created equal, and some risks are better than others. Taking reckless risks without proper consideration can lead to negative consequences that outweigh any potential benefits.
In conclusion, taking risks can be scary, but the advantages of doing so far outweigh the disadvantages. When approached thoughtfully and with careful planning, taking risks can lead to personal and professional growth, financial success, and a sense of accomplishment. As the famous quote from André Gide reads, "Man cannot discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore."
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31944444444 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97011737516 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6922186609 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.388888889 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396472072992 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148184895707 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088572736899 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236493111852 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548681499035 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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