It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the authorites are unable to support people around the world so that they should concentrate on giving a hand to people in their own countries. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view because it is possible to help people all over the world.
There are some reasons why governments can support all people in the world. Firstly, it is easier to help people in different countries with the development of transportation. Modern means of transport can supply goods not only to the remote corners of their own countries but also to foreign countries where people are suffering disasters. For example, airplane can transport essential goods to flooded areas like the central of Vietnam and to the neighbor countries like Laos and Cambodia to help residents there.
Secondly, there are many international aid agencies, both government and non-government, having branchesin different countries and these organisations can provide support immediatly, whenever needed. These organisations have sufficient resources and budgets, which is possible to help people around the world. UNICEF, for instance, is a organisation having an origin in USA but can provide help to developing countries like Vietnam and can support Vietnameses who are suffering natural disasters like flood or hurricanes.
In conclusion, I believe that, governments now are able to help not only their own residents but also all people in the world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35087719298 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99120234593 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8626877365 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325542927865 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156321756508 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11147761608 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248018037035 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120794562759 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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