It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the question that whether people should raise their knowledge about various cultures by reading from media service or by visiting other places have been received a great deal of public attention. Although the idea of studying cultures through media service, which permits people to go out, seems attractive, I utterly disagree with this view.
One reason that why physical travel should be appreciated more than study from the press is the accuracy of information about cultures. Since when people read books to learn about culture, they just can get information from the perspective of the writer or what the writer can see. Furthermore, if people learn about a particular culture, this means that they taste the food, meet people, know history,... of this culture, which people can not do if they just stay at home and read about a culture. As the result, people can not know exactly about cultures if they do not visit other places so that studying from books, films, and the internet should not be considered a potential method to know about cultures.
Another compelling reason that humans should travel to research about cultures is special experience and feeling during the journey. Some opponents may say that it is enough to see everything through pictures, but it will be far more significant if people can touch or taste them. For instance, everyone can see Hanbok - traditional clothes of Korean, which is review as one of the most wonderful traditional clothes in the world, but putting on it will be a great experience that no one can deny. Moreover, travelling to new lands is the best way to make people know deeper and remember longer about cultures. In fact, the science proved that memories provided by tactile sense, taste, hearing will last longer than ones provided by visual.
In conclusion, it seems to me that visiting other places is the best approach for people wanting to know more about some cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...aste the food, meet people, know history,... of this culture, which people can not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00307692308 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49232326568 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532307692308 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3269577537 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253001417666 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908053843175 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589039456036 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147551442976 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635658584914 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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