It is not uncommon that children are required to obey the rules of their parents and teachers. Some people are worried that too much control over children will not prepared them well for their adult life. What's your opinion?
Youngsters are usually requested by adults to comply with a huge number of regulations that is such a concern over some individuals due to excessive command having effects on the future. However, from my perspective, I equally agree and disagree with this statement.
One of the main reasons making this idea reasonable is that rules setting is beneficial in upbringing a child. In fact, the orders from parents and teachers can protect children from threats and dangers in their lives. Since young people are curious and adventurous, they always desire to try doing something new and interesting without being conscious of the risks involved, for example, using knives, playing with fire, or taking medicines resembling candies that can lead to unexpected accidents and injuries. In addition, regulations help instruct offspring to behave properly in daily life. Once being impressionable, children may imitate others’ negative behaviors and actions regardless of its good or bad impacts, such as using swear words and offensive gestures without knowing their unacceptable meanings.
On the other hand, a wide variety of orders for youngsters to abide by are likely to prevent natural development, especially when abused. Obviously, children will be definitely affected by the loss of curiosity and creativity to discover different ideas because of being forbidden to do many things ranging from the most simple to the most difficult ones. To illustrate, too much authority from adults may turn children into timid and dependent. It means that they are less confident to solve problems or make decisions by themselves, hence the reliance on others for solutions. Therefore, if the young keep waiting for help and support from parents and teachers, they will not be well-prepared for adulthood since life is full of opportunities and challenges to confront.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the positive influences during children nurturing, rules imposed on them somehow appear to lessen their native ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 761, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'confronting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: confronting
...is full of opportunities and challenges to confront. In conclusion, notwithstanding the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48397435897 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92142996506 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660256410256 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1964819493 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24649865137 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736721179429 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580881078407 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129742803335 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465732866003 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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