Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Small markets are being changed to be huge shopping malls. This will build a convenient city as a positive of this issue. However, the traders of small shops will pay higher taxes which makes the number of traders decline. if the authority collects all traders in the huge malls.
The decision to collect all traders in the large shopping malls is the solution for constructing a city plan. It is crucial that the government create a convenient city in order to obtain a better life for society. Most developed countries in Europe have organized many small markets since the early 90s by building some malls in the city center. This will be straightforward the local or international tourists to find merchandise.
On the other hand, this rule makes the traders of small businesses have to pay higher taxes thus the number of traders in the malls decreases. These ones have managed income for their small business before this rule, yet have to recalculate so they do not be bankrupt when joining the malls. For example, most small businesses in developing countries of Southeast Asia had to face the dilemma of either joining the malls by paying taxes two times more or the authorities demolishing their shops.
In conclusion, the decision to change small shops become large shopping malls provides negative and positive. This way forms a better face of the city because it can be suitable for the people. Even though, some traders decide to leave the malls; therefore they have to pay higher taxes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ch makes the number of traders decline. if the authority collects all traders in t...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'These' instead.
Suggestion: These
...mber of traders in the malls decreases. These ones have managed income for their small bus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90196078431 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55966404947 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7583434072 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234688364847 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087633981625 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10568547194 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155665473817 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391098671457 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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