Advent of vaccines has helped in checking many diseases. However, the vaccination is to be made mandatory or left to the parent to decide for their children is a debateable topic. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and explain the neccesity of free and complusory medication for young ones.
To begin with, every year goverment chart many programmes to erradicate diseases. These include free vaccinations of pulse polio drops, small pox vaccination and yellow fever vaccine. As a result, India is declared polio free last year. So, results of forced vaccinations are real and positive. Moreover, not everyone has income to have vaccination done on their own. So, it is necessary that it is aided by the state. Secondly, due to illiteracy in rural area, most of the people are not aware of the benefits of vaccination. Hence, driven by the law they take their children to local hospitals for vaccination and reap the rewards of it.
On flip side, every year hundred of cases come forward where children suffer due to side effects of vaccination. Thus, making it necessary can have adverse affect on the society. Additionally, components of vaccination can be allergic to some people. So, proper care and test are required before vaccination. Therefore, final decision should be given to the family to decide.
In conclusion, for the betterment of the public it need to be a neccesity and goverment must run numerous programme to vaccinate the young ones. But, parents must hold the right to veto as they are best judge for their kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95038167939 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73667316089 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2769045925 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.0555555556 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241898094836 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677226969755 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065733660423 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139630957617 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218132931949 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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