Many cities around the world these days are becoming more and more polluted.
Why is this happening? What solutions can you suggest.
It is irrefutable that pollution has become a huge concern for us. Pollution are increasing day by day in several metropolitan cities across the globe. Over population and over usage of vehicles are the two crucial reasons behind the pollution. Despite of having problems of pollution, we can overcome this situation by taking viable measures.
To embark on it, increasing number of people which leads to pollution. Nowadays, population growth has augmented which leads us to problems like traffic congestion, over usage of water and food. Hence, pollution will be ris due to crowd ed cities. Another is, number of cars are increased in cities which has created a negative consequence like traffic congestion. What I mean, cars emits carbon dioxide in the air that affects quality of air. Also, it spreads noise pollution in the cities. As a result air and noise pollution will rise in the cities. For example, in Delhi which is capital of India, due to excessive usage of cars which spreads air pollution. so, air quality of this city is degraded by fumes of fuels. It is highest polluted city in India in terms of air. Moreover, industrial expansion is also play a vital role in pollution. Toxic gases and polluted water of factories are influenced air and water resources in urban areas.
Nevertheless, taking potential steps we can deter pollution. Firstly, Decrease the use of private vehicles. In other words, government should limit the number of vehicles on the roads. Consequently, pollution which is spreaded by cars will be reduced. Secondly, spreading awareness in people. Government should start campaigns which persuade people about negative impacts of pollution. Hence, it can create great impact on people's minds. For instance, the government of India has started campaign which name is go clean go green. They are aware citizens of India about pollution.
In conclusion, even though pollution has created a threat to environment, by applying above measures we will be able to reduce pollution in cities. If we want to fight against pollution, governments and people should stand together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16618075802 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75273318187 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.308708599 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.6296296296 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7037037037 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2962962963 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111824499439 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349287122438 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409372380992 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772180475168 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478031977038 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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