Many companies today sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing for the world of sports. Others think this has disadvantages. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many companies today sponsor sports as a means of advertising themselves. Some individuals view this as a positive development for the world of sports, while others see certain disadvantages. This essay will discuss both perspectives and present my own opinion on the matter.
On one hand, sports sponsorship can offer benefits to athletes by alleviating financial concerns and allowing them to focus more on their training. Moreover, it grants them access to exclusive facilities, such as fields that meet international standards, which can enhance their innate talent. Consequently, sponsoring can effectively elevate the quality of training and contribute to the overall advancement of the sports industry.
On the other hand, there are certain disadvantages associated with this form of promotion. Firstly, audiences may be subjected to unwanted interruptions, such as television advertisements, which can diminish their interest in watching the matches. Secondly, companies often seek to have their brand names displayed on athletes' uniforms or advertise their products through LED screens, potentially undermining the true essence of sports and unintentionally commercializing the game. By treating spectators as potential clients, companies risk diminishing the purity of the sport.
However, despite these drawbacks, I believe that the advantages of sports sponsorship outweigh the disadvantages. Financial support from companies can lead to more efficient organization of sports events, particularly specialized competitions, thus fostering the development of sports and increasing their influence among the public. Furthermore, the negative impacts of funding sport organizations are unlikely to significantly hamper the overall progress of sports and can be deemed acceptable.
In conclusion, sports sponsorship carries both positive and negative implications. Nevertheless, I contend that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and therefore, this practice should be sustained.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ibute to the overall advancement of the sports industry. On the other hand, there are...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14285714286 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40419159393 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0603468892 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289079837716 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100620703719 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722998537044 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168046449803 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122532559636 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.33 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ibute to the overall advancement of the sports industry. On the other hand, there are...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14285714286 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40419159393 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0603468892 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289079837716 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100620703719 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722998537044 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168046449803 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122532559636 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.33 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.