In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creats problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that today, in most of countries people live a longer life. This situation has more drawbacks than positive consequences for governments, such as a lack of productive labor and huge health-related expenditure.
Undoubtedly, having an aging population causes some economic issues. This means while the vast majority of society is retired or close to the retirement age, fewer young people are ready to replace them. In other words, there are not enough employers and employees to fill in various job positions as the major part of society is not productive any more. This situation diminishes the economy of the country, and can even lead to long periods of economic recession. Many companies, for instance, can be closed due to a lack of sufficient labor in countries that are experiencing an aging population.
In addition, the increasing number of elderly charges the authorities with huge amounts of money that should be spent on their health issues. This is because as people get older, they require more health services, such as medication and different aids. So, the government should allocate a significant budget to sanitary problems, instead of investing in developing certain businesses and industries that contribute to progress in economies. To illustrate the point, an aging population needs more equipped hospitals with enough facilities to help the elderly with their physical problems.
In conclusion, although people at older ages have many benefits for both societies and governments, the downsides outweigh the upsides since the country’s industry is endangered, and the states should spend a distinguished amount on health centers and aiding services for the elderly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
It is true that today, in most of countries people live a longer life. This situati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38951310861 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94867655584 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6328655664 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328030869896 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109069479217 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758925108699 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188211923238 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038295366692 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.