In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people.
What do you think may be the reasons for this?
What problems might this cause in society?
Humans physical and psychological features corrupt by the time they get older. In ancient times it is seen that older people get respect for their experience and for their oldness in order to honor and make happy them. So helping them and ignoring their mistakes is crucial.
Nowadays most of the people do not respect to older people enough because of their lack of respect which can be taught by parents. Even though parents try to teach their children about respect the internet corrupts the generations in bad way. There are lots of content that bullies with older people and make fun of their corrupted reflexes. It affects the children even the young ones in a bad way. However, some of the people tries to respect their older ones more in some countries, and it is because of their culture.
The older people should be shown respect due to the experience of life. However, it should not be the only reason the fact that some of the older people lose their faith in life. People show respect to ignite the older ones will to live since most of the older people think only about death. Giving them hope, making them happy satisfies the humans soul.
In conclusion if someone wants to be shown respect when he/she gets older, he/she must show respect to older people while he/she is young, and respecting is not a hard thing too. It is the most crucial manner that people must have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65991902834 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1209552207 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48987854251 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9909994418 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2142857143 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143936790982 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574332162135 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503908086689 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989748978453 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235635590168 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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