In many countries today respect is shown to older people.
What do you think may be the reasons for this?
What problems might this cause in society?
In much of the world, particularly Asia countries, older people are respected. This essay will discuss the reasons behind and problms the trend may lead to.
Showing respect toward seniors is deep-rooted culture in many countries. During its long history, humanities have found respecting older people a habit redounding to the advantage of the whole group. It frees community members from the worry that they will be foresaked by their adult children when becoming old and frail. And hence, our forebears called it a virtue and eastablished it as an essential part of the culture that still prevail in many parts of the world.
But the culture brings demerits. Nations under the dominance of the senior culture are often adopt a seniority-based system, that is to say, they always put the elderly in the driving seat and devalue young people, however well is their performance. Such a system is obviously less effecient than a preformance-based one. As seniors have priority in almost everything, the last thing for young people to make persistent efforts to innovate and the first thing for them is to manage to finish assigned tasks.
Certainly, respecting seniors is a virtue. On the other hand, the prevalence of such a culture may result in an ineffective system. We should adopt a performance-based system while retain the culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iors have priority in almost everything, the last thing for young people to make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, may, so, still, well, while, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12727272727 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89265241889 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645454545455 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5340126509 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7692307692 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116047261548 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381426862691 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035529955355 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718141987768 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375476857248 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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