In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, it is undeniable that there is a drastic fall in the number of youngsters who are fond of reading newspapers or watching news on television. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main causes of this issue and recommend a few productive solutions to it.
First and foremost, there is plethora of factors that more and more young people find it boring to read newspapers or follow the news on TV. Initially, with the advancements of modern technology, youngsters are likely to read online news which is much more optional for them, supply them with many updated stories about their idols, their general trends on social media rather than be overwhelmed by a great number of political or economic news. Besides, the young generation now has squandered too much time and money on the internet playing video games or chatting with their friends and living a virtue world on the grounds that they are impacted by the idea that reading newspaper is a waste of time which does not bring any value for them. Last but not least, it is common knowledge that the young have to cope with the fast space of modern life no less than adults. Students have to go through a tough and tight schedule with homework, extra curricular activities. Others are burdened by the pressure of being successful at workplace to make their parents proud. As a result, it is understandable that youngsters have cared little about social news.
Nevertheless, I still believe that this problem should be tackled as soon as possible as the young especially students can reap a lot of potential benefits from reading newspapers or watching news on TV. We need to take proactive measures to persuade more and more people to have a habit of reading news. It is crucial for the educational system to make a considerable change with the aim of creating a culture of reading for children at the very young age. Furthermore, in terms of program producers or, it would be much better when news channels or magazines make content that caters for adolescence’s need. For example, they can attach teenagers’ attention by means of reporting about social trends among the young, or famous people with unique styles and talents.
To sum up, I think reading newspapers accompanied by getting news from TV plays an integral part in every day life. Therefore, people should apply some methods to form a more civilized society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86829268293 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71970905992 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7407015763 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230099657019 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074548322938 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582000577656 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14716789501 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238469021429 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.