In the modern world, a dramatic rise of the lack of proper physical exercises is reported by numerous experts. There are plenty of reasons to this problems: the advancement in tecchnology, stressful life, no balance between work and social life, etc. However, solutions for such problem is quite simple. In this essay, we will discuss the causes and methods to tackle this problem.
First and foremost, technology and the introduction of new generations of smart devices is the top reason for this problem.The further we advance into the future, the more sophisticated devices we create. Due to this constant upgrade, people spend more of their leisure time on social media; thus, more people develop signs of laziness and cease to follow their usual routines, neglecting their physical wellbeing. Next to it, the life to day is extremely stressing. Working a minimum of 8 hours per day has become mandatory in many enterprises, new jobs are founded and an enormous working force is needed in many fields. This phenomenon pushes people to work even harder under harsher environment, causing them to focus most of their time on working. Ultimately, this prevents people from indulging in physical activities; therefore, affects their personal life and physical health adversely. It is proven in many researches that overwork can make one suffer many chronic health issues and even death.
Nevertheless, the adequacy of physical exercies can still be tackled in many ways. The most effective way to prevent such issue is that the government should allocate resources to maintain public sport facilities and set up campaigns to educate people how to construct a healthy routine and how to balnce work and life. Secondly, working hours must be limited strictly by law and every companies should have a mental consulting office to prevent overworking and other issues that compel people to give up on their physicals activities.
In conclusion, although the society is amid a significant deprivation of exercises, it can be resolved by regulating the working time and proper education for a healthier lifestyle
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22123893805 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77842284171 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598820058997 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0565241812 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171151523527 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611141910435 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463968365727 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937487093723 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705647066047 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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