In many families both parents engaged in bread winning. Why it is so?
The earning by both father and mother is common scenario in families. In this modern world expenses are high and comfortable lifestyle is need of every house. This essay will answer the reasons for this trend.
The expenditure of modern families are high as compared to families budget and in order to full fill their demand both parents enrolled themselve at work. In addition to this, the parents are very much worried about their offsprings education which is very much costly. The more protective parents about their child education and for his bright future choose more and more earning sources. For instance, A survey conducted in India convey that higher education is possible for those childrens whose both parents are at occupation. Thus, neccesities of family force both parents at job.
The better way of living is requirement of every family. In today's era everyone is rushing towards a comfortable living standard which include own house with all modern facilities, personal vehicle and sufficient amount of money. These all leisures are only possible for family with elixir of money which comes from work only. For example , in America standard of living is higher and prosperity prevail in those families where both supreme of family earn bread for their needs. Apart from this, the lust of aggressive materialistic world and show off of richness may be additional reasons for this trend. Hence, a benchmark way of living urge both partners to be at occupation.
In conclusion, The both supreme of families are earner for their survival. This discussion is strong enough to provide reasons for this ritual in families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52564957271 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0681440807 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16771744343 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643133384676 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700249586467 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979449326675 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559037679186 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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