In many families today, both parents are working. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?
Nowadays, more and more men and women, who have children, are having jobs to fulfill their families’ needs. This essay will discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of this.
To begin with, if both parents are working, more income is generated. Therefore, families can have a good quality of living. In other words, they can afford nutritious food, reliable healthcare, and better education opportunities. They can also take a family vacation at any desired place without worrying about financial burden. Another plus point is that children can learn teamwork from this. Parents can take turns in doing household chores and teach children to do so. Accordingly, every family member has his or her own responsibility to do the chores.
However, working parents may lead to several negative consequences. First, when both of them are too busy at work, they may not be able to have sufficient quality time with their children. Consequently, the children tend to feel neglected and lack of affection and support. This may lead to children having low motivation in learning; as a result, their academic performance may be disrupted. Another drawback is that without enough parental supervision, children are likely to develop bad habits particularly if their surroundings and peers are influencing certain bad behaviours such as addiction to games, smoking, and even taking drugs.
In conclusion, having dual income is certainly advantageous for families, since this can secure financial needs, and teach children to work collaboratively at home. Nevertheless, this may be disadvantageous when both parents are overworked, they have limited time to take care and supervise their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41287878788 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96019031463 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3535571526 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154960742449 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541449522893 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481462451429 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955227067203 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431276863565 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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