Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Museum is a place to keep and conserve the historical values as archives of a country or a nation. These values attract million of visitor, especially tourist to come to enjoy and learn about the history or the secret behind it. Nowadays, many museums require charging for visiting admission while other museums keep it free. People enquire about how good and bad when they decide to get admission charging. Their decision has both sides, however, I think that advantages of this matter occupy the majority because of some reasons.
On the one hand, charging brings several benefits for not only museum but also for visitors. The museum use this income firstly for preserving and restoring articles. These works are very important because some articles may exist for thousand years. In reality, some museums lose their customers for the reason that they cannot keep the articles look like at first. Besides, they also use this amount of money for paying salary for their employees and paying taxes for government. Thank to visitors facility fee, employees salary can be increased, which give them motivation to do their job better. For people who need to pay fee, I believe that they have responsibility with that amount of money. Therefore, they will give more respect and give their whole mind to the articles to deserve of the charge.
On the other hand, every matter has two sides, there are some drawbacks with admission charge. First big problem is that it can decrease quantity of visitors who want to visit free. As they just have little interest in these articles, if the museum demand no fee, they will have chance to increase their knowledge. Furthermore, some museums demand too high price for charge so that even visitors who are willing to pay fee for admission, they will become hesitant or unpleasant because they think that this is unnecessary. Another problem may rise when some people include elder people and pupils who do not have ability to make their own money to pay for fee want to visit museum. They absolutely can ask for their relatives or parents, however, if one person need to pay for some people, the amount of money becomes high and they may change their decision.
In conclusion, although disadvantages of museum admission charge has still existed, I cannot deny that the advantages outweigh the drawbacks. Museum is a cultural and historical space for everyone to enjoy with the articles. The responsibility in contribution for conservation and development of museum also lies with visitors, therefore, in my opinion, paying facility fee is a good way to show their courage and construction to the museum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ant because some articles may exist for thousand years. In reality, some museums lose th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53641201007 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495475113122 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7637472282 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.454545455 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386333813444 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126844192421 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12135846907 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273645803766 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559506799554 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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