It is true that competition is an effective factor in different activities and even in our life to be promoted, it is not a reason that competition always has positive consequences. However, I think its advantages outweigh its drawbacks.
To begin with, competition is the act of some competitors or efforts of one, two or more independence parties to achieve their desire results. In fact, the significant point is always to have healthy and cooperative competition rather than detrimental one. It is an obvious issue that plethora of businesses and organizations believe that it is a vital key of prosperity that is why they use this approach to motivate their employees. Some benefits of competition include productive resulting from cooperative teamwork and mutual efforts. Furthermore, competition increases creativity, innovation and ideas by sharing their information and using other's experiences. In this case the expectations are going higher from teams and labors to produce higher quality output. Besides, healthy competition helps people to alter their attitudes to foster the senses of "respect, care and empathy".
On the other hand, competition has negative aspects which are more prevalent rather than positives among the people. Actually, when a project teams or group of employees experience negative competition, there are many factors form competitors which greatly jeopardize team's ability. Initially, negative contest fosters hostility, anger and pessimism which leads to increase stress, mental and physical ailments. Negative rivalry also impacts on team's behavior and their reactions which definitely decreases their efficiency. Additionally, it causes to growing feeling of suspicion and lack of trust among members which can dissipate team, company or even personal life.
In conclusion, I think without competition it would be impossible to grow and develop a project or activity because it is an effective method to spark minds and creativity; however, harmful incidents may happen due to unhealthy competitions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, i think, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67857142857 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13434468911 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7880365655 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229658335268 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743716311842 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568054286418 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135805417785 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604003418412 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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