Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in the cities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether to adopt a healthy lifestyle in rural or urban areas. While some people consider cities as an ideal place for a healthy lifestyle, I believe that living in the countryside is much healthier.
On the one hand, urban dwellers have easier access to health services and diverse sources of healthy food. Firstly, residing in the cities provides citizens with numerous modern sports facilities such as gyms, swimming pools, and municipal parks. As a result, people can take regular exercise and avoid a sedentary lifestyle. In addition, it is easier to contact medical practitioners to check, diagnose and care for whenever they suffer from health issues. Secondly, people in urban areas enjoy the cross-cultural wealth of nutrient-dense, healthy recipes for all seasons with the aid of countless convenience stores and supermarkets, which open 24/7 all year round. Thus, they are spoilt for choice in terms of healthy diet meals.
On the other hand, living in rural areas, in contrast, offers uncontaminated country air and tranquility. First of all, people especially the elderly stand a good chance of meditating and going for a walk in a fresh environment. While there has been a rocketing number of poisonous chemicals from industrial zones and private cars in sprawling cities due to overpopulation density, the countryside has a much lower population rate and risks of pneumonia and heart diseases. Secondly, people relish peaceful lifestyles in rural regions and escape from the hectic pace of city life. For example, whereas residents in urban regions constantly hear the incessant roars of trucks and buses regardless of days and nights, people who decide to settle down in the countryside mostly immerse themselves in tranquil moments and spend more relaxing time on self-care and self-growth.
In conclusion, although urban areas offer some potential benefits, I still believe that countryside conditions are more suitable for a healthy lifestyle because of the clean environment and peace.
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- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Others believe that there are health benefits of living in the cities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36760124611 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86253340508 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623052959502 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8376448341 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247981042569 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818544083152 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610831146206 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164795905859 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764110387619 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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