Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?
The trend of foreign employment and education is becoming ever more popular in recent times. This is not without reason, as there are a plethora of incentives such as financial stability or greater opportunities. While there may be many tradeoffs, I believe that the benefits do present a better balance to the risks present.
The foremost reason that encourages people to relocate abroad is perhaps the promise of a better future. In many countries, especially developing ones, chances for an elevated social status are scarce and require intensive and extensive knowledge, experience, and training. Consequently, nations with competitive developments in respective fields often attract talents. With Australia being a leading innovator in modern agricultural integration, or advanced Arts and Media tertiary programs, it is obvious for students and workers alike to migrate there for those in the profession. Another potential this trend could bring about is the appeal of foreign presence it could provide. Professionals with multiple years in an international conglomerate abroad certainly look more reliable than the domestic competition and could be a better guarantee for their career tracks than the rest. The benefits are invaluable, and the investment is certainly worthwhile to many that are seeking to ameliorate their status quo.
However, the drawbacks are still imminent, especially in terms of personal wellness and security. When departing your hometown, it is inevitable for the immigrant to feel a sense of detachment in their new environments. Cultural shocks, time differences, and language barriers are all factors instigating sadness, and in some cases, depression. Without people of familiarity, a person cannot find someone to confide in or to share interests with. Another conspicuous and concerning fact is the safety of one’s stay since we are completely like a fish out of water. We do not know of our surrounding neighborhood, its quirks, its problems, and everything about its ins and outs. As such, one cannot always feel at ease during their initial phase.
With regards to the downside, however, these are just an inherent sense of insecurity that is not just unique to moving to another country, but also to moving around in general. These feelings of anxiety and nervousness will gradually fade with time, as we start to adapt familiarize ourselves with these novelties, and even start to make them feel at home. Lethargic days will turn into comfort, intense weather will become normalcy; language barriers will be torn, and loneliness will be accompanied. New feelings will replace the dwindling old ones and will not be with us for the entirety of our stay.
It is such that I perceive the advantages to outshine those opposite. With promising prospects for future developments, the chances are worth the risks to take, especially when those drawbacks could come to pass.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 499, Rule ID: OBVIOUS_FOR[1]
Message: The adjective obvious is normally used with 'to': 'obvious to students'.
Suggestion: obvious to students
...Arts and Media tertiary programs, it is obvious for students and workers alike to migrate there for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, may, so, still, well, while, in general, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2459.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 460.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34565217391 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92988238246 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4061471135 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.913043478 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0925218440542 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026887495267 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282002195597 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492135245437 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329729723216 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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